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Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249357#msg249357
« on: January 16, 2011, 08:46:03 pm »
NAME:
Fire Avatar
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
6 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|1
TEXT:
Heatwave: While this card is on the field, all non-fire creatures' attacks are reduced by 1 each turn.
NAME:
Corona Avatar
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
5 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|2
TEXT:
Heat Stroke: While this card is on the field, all non-fire creatures' HPs are reduced by 1 each turn.
ART:
Ignion
IDEA:
Ignion (me)
NOTES:
Avatar: A variant form of an entity.

Elemental Avatar Legend:

     Endless time has passed since the creatures of opposing elements began the epic war. Some fought for justice; some fought for faith; some fought for peace; some fought to survive. A countless battle after another was fought from dusk till dawn. Million lives have been lost. As the lost souls returned to their respective elemental creator, the elementilord, elementilords shed tears for their lost children. That was when the miracle happened. Their tears were transformed into avatars, embodiments of elementilord's sorrow, love, and magical power. They are also reincarnations of the lost elemental creatures.
     Because they were born of the lost souls and elementilords' wish to end the war, they are void of attack powers. Instead, each avatar was born with a unique miraculous power, a miracle that reflects their wish to bring an end to the war and the sufferings.
      :fire The Fire Avatar thought, "I can stop the war if I exhaust everyone with my heat!" Thus was born Heatwave/Heat Stroke, the scorching power to take away will to fight.
      The legend says that the avatars will only show themselves to those who possess kindness, love, and will to end the war. Will their dream come true? Perhaps it is in your hands now. Thus, the epic battle of Elements continues...

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249358#msg249358
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 08:46:52 pm »
Since the ability is re-usable, it should maybe be slightly more expensive.

Maybe 2 :fire | 3 :fire
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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249361#msg249361
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2011, 08:49:05 pm »
'Idea' should say the name of the person who came up with the idea, probably you. This goes for all of your cards.
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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249432#msg249432
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2011, 10:07:16 pm »
isnt that sauron? ;D

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249453#msg249453
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2011, 10:24:57 pm »
Multiple targeting still doesn't exist, and the ability looks slightly OP for its cost... This would make an earth/fire permanents' control devastating..

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249546#msg249546
« Reply #5 on: January 17, 2011, 12:40:51 am »
So, what should I do? Increase the cost?

ddevans96: Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't know that. I corrected other posts.

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249557#msg249557
« Reply #6 on: January 17, 2011, 12:51:38 am »
I actually made that same mistake when I started making cards :)
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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249564#msg249564
« Reply #7 on: January 17, 2011, 12:54:38 am »
No need, just further reduce the cost and keep the same ability, or maybe tweak it to destroy 1 perm and inflict some damage to your opponent, and keep the cost the same :)

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249568#msg249568
« Reply #8 on: January 17, 2011, 12:56:57 am »
Am I the only person who thinks this is one of the most ridiculously OP card suggestions? This is on par with making a card that says "6 :fire you can't lose the game"

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249574#msg249574
« Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 01:00:49 am »
Am I the only person who thinks this is one of the most ridiculously OP card suggestions? This is on par with making a card that says "6 :fire you can't lose the game"
Not THAT much, but yes, it's OP


Remember that destroy costs 3 :entropy and no creature has it, and if you want it, you need to use BE in a small creature... What I mean, reusable PC can't be cheap, and IDK if Zanz would like it.

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249581#msg249581
« Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 01:03:31 am »
The 3rd time Krathos outtypes me D:

Anyway yes, butterfly effect is the same. Pulverizer is the only reusable PC but has more limitations than this one. Maybe the cost of the ability should be raised further.

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Re: Fire Avatar | Corona Avatar https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=19619.msg249643#msg249643
« Reply #11 on: January 17, 2011, 01:35:50 am »
Explosion on a creature is worth only 2-3quanta
Fire creatures get 1 free attack point
Balanced cost for unupped is 1|2 :fire

The upgraded required multi-targeting which does not exist yet.

Suggestion: Increase stats and balanced cost of unupped and make upgraded get a cost reduction but otherwise be identical to unupped.
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