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Zombie | Ghoul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg204635#msg204635
« on: November 19, 2010, 06:25:28 pm »
NAME:
Zombie
ELEMENT:
:death
COST:
4
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
2|4
TEXT:
:death :death: Curse: Poisons the target creature. When the target  dies, it turns into a skeleton for you.
NAME:
Ghoul
ELEMENT:
:death
COST:
4
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3|4
TEXT:
:death: Curse: Poisons the target creature. When the target  dies, it turns into a skeleton for you.
ART:
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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg204644#msg204644
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2010, 06:50:34 pm »
Idea and numbers look alright. Just use this picture as a placeholder, I found it via Google. You'll need to resize it to 255x255 pixels, but that's not a big deal :P
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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg204656#msg204656
« Reply #2 on: November 19, 2010, 07:25:34 pm »
This is a great idea. I would recommend increasing the cost to 5 :darkness. But this is a great card, innovative, close to balanced, thematically appropriate both to the name and the elements involved.
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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg204975#msg204975
« Reply #3 on: November 20, 2010, 04:05:00 am »
Say "Poisons the target creature. When the target creature dies, it turns into a skeleton on your side of the field."
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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205006#msg205006
« Reply #4 on: November 20, 2010, 05:14:11 am »
i absolutley <3 the idea, mainly cause death is my fqav element followed closley by darkness and this would only strenghten the bond (or synergy as my friend says [Nepycros])  :death :darkness :death :darkness :death :darkness

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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205081#msg205081
« Reply #5 on: November 20, 2010, 07:58:31 am »
Shouldn't the card actually be called "Ghoul" not "Ghul"?
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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205084#msg205084
« Reply #6 on: November 20, 2010, 08:01:27 am »
alright, mine mistake, bit changes

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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205087#msg205087
« Reply #7 on: November 20, 2010, 08:04:01 am »
alright, mine mistake, bit changes
The title as well needs to change I'm afraid.
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Re: Zombie | Ghoul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205089#msg205089
« Reply #8 on: November 20, 2010, 08:06:54 am »
changed

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Re: Zombie | Ghul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205659#msg205659
« Reply #9 on: November 20, 2010, 11:14:02 pm »
i absolutley <3 the idea, mainly cause death is my fqav element followed closley by darkness and this would only strenghten the bond (or synergy as my friend says [Nepycros])  :death :darkness :death :darkness :death :darkness
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Re: Zombie | Ghoul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205695#msg205695
« Reply #10 on: November 20, 2010, 11:38:12 pm »
Nepycros has a good point. There probably is not enough variety of cards in the game to begin creating slight variants.
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Re: Zombie | Ghoul https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=15972.msg205704#msg205704
« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2010, 11:46:54 pm »
Nepycros has a good point.
Don't I always?

Aside from that, I would say make it a Death creature, just to keep the boundary line distinct. After all, a Zombie is unDEAD, so what does it have to do with Darkness anyway?
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