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NAME: | Tethys, the Mother
| ELEMENT: | Water
| COST: | 8
| TYPE: | Creature
| ATK|HP: | 3|4
| TEXT: | Titan discard a card named Tethys, the Mother: Put 2 Oceanids into play. Whenever you play a water pillar put 2 Oceanids into play.
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| NAME: | Tethys, the Mother
| ELEMENT: | Water
| COST: | 7
| TYPE: | Creature
| ATK|HP: | 3|4
| TEXT: | Titan discard a card named Tethys, the Mother: Put 2 Oceanids into play. Whenever you play a water pillar put 2 Oceanids into play.
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ART: | | IDEA: | Uppercut
| NOTES: | Titan: You can only control 1 Titan of the same name. Oceanids are 1|2 and 2|2 (upgraded) water type creatures.
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So now comes the part about my doubts. The text is almost twice as long as what Planplan's image builder allows. Is this idea too convoluted? Also, does it seem balanced? Should the formatting on the activated ability say to discard the card before or after the colon? The difference is the way it is currently formatted associates the discarding as part of the cost, the latter implies the discard is part of the ability.
Also, technically it should be "Titaness" but I figured that if the ability gets used again somewhere else it'd be better to not have multiple keywords for the same ability. Also "Tethys (1)" could work as it suggests that there can only be 1 Tethys and furthering that logic you could get things like "Name (#)" to imply a limited amount of something in play at once. I don't know. The idea needs a lot of working.