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Re: Skeleton King | Skeleton Overlord http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59973.msg1211407#msg1211407
« Reply #24 on: October 20, 2015, 06:34:10 PM »
The card idea is solid, in my opinion, but I want to suggest some wording edits. :)

:death : Sacrifice your skeletons to add X poison counters on opponent and +X to Skeleton King's attack this turn. X = number of sacficed skeletons.

(replacing "King" with "Overlord" in upgraded version, of course)

If only that'd fit the card description space :(

Can you give a preview (spoilered if you want) here of what that text looks like _trying_ to fit on the card? :)

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Re: Skeleton King | Skeleton Overlord http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59973.msg1211409#msg1211409
« Reply #25 on: October 20, 2015, 06:37:37 PM »

:death : Sacrifice N (all) skeletons to add N poison counters to opponent and +N to Skeleton King's attack this turn.
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Re: Skeleton King | Skeleton Overlord http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59973.msg1211419#msg1211419
« Reply #26 on: October 20, 2015, 08:24:06 PM »

:death : Sacrifice N (all) skeletons to add N poison counters to opponent and +N to Skeleton King's attack this turn.

I'll update to this tomorrow since it seems my wording isn't clear enough x), thank you!
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Re: Skeleton King | Skeleton Overlord http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59973.msg1211792#msg1211792
« Reply #27 on: October 22, 2015, 02:55:38 PM »
Card has been updated, thank you onion for the text and thank you ET for the art <3.
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Re: Skeleton King | Skeleton Overlord http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59973.msg1211800#msg1211800
« Reply #28 on: October 22, 2015, 03:12:01 PM »
Get this in the game...

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NOW!
;D

Or at least Cygnia :P

(i.e. - I really like this and please let me know when it goes into Crucible or wherever card ideas are voted for)
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anything
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