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Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231136#msg1231136
« on: April 19, 2016, 04:30:49 am »

 
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Welcome to another Card Design Challenge! Every other week, Card Curators will host a card design challenge with a certain theme or gimmick. During those 2 weeks, your goal is to design the best card you can that works with the challenge! Once those 2 weeks are up, a new Card Design Challenge will start and the current challenge will go into the Voting Phase! The winners of each poll will be awarded points.

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Score Table
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Amount of peoplePoints given/scored
31 point for first.
4-62 points for first, 1 point for second.
7-83 points for first, 2 second, 1 third. 7 gives 2 votes.
9-114 points for first, 3 second, 2 third, 1 fourth.
12-135 for first, 4 2nd, 3 3rd, 2 4th, 1 5th. 12 gives 3 votes.
14-166 for first, 5 2nd, 4 3rd, 3 4th, 2 5th, 1 6th.


This week's challenge is to Improve upon 1 card idea created in Brawl #5 for its challenge!


For reference, here are all the custom-made cards from Brawl #5.

Not including upgraded cards or cards without images or cards where their images had been deleted (most of A Toadally Newtral Team's cards :'( )

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Round 1

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Round 2

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Round 3

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Round 4

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Round 5

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Round 6

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Rules
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Create a thematic, balanced and appropriate card by using a card from Brawl #5 and improving upon it. In the notes make sure to explain why your card design better satisfies the challenge. Keep in mind that the card submission must still be thematic, balanced and appropriate, so joke submissions for Brawl may be more challenging to improve upon. The link to the original card must be included in the Notes.

Make sure to follow the general rules below.

Submit your card idea using the code below. Card submissions which do not follow the format below will not be considered.
Do not put art in your card. Do not include your name in the Idea section. Do not submit more than one card. Do not title the spoiler. Submit the upgraded and unupgraded.


Any and all tools required for submissions can be found HERE, the Smithy.

Submit your ideas in this thread - whether or not you make a separate thread for your card idea for Cygnia is up to you.



Spoiler for Card Design Challenge Submission format:
Code: [Select]
[spoiler][table][tr][td][center][img width=289 height=443]http://[/img][/center][/td][td][center][img width=289 height=443][/img][/center][/td][/tr][tr][td][table][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299]NAME: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Click here to add title
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] ELEMENT: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Other
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] COST: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
X
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] TYPE: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Creature
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] ATK | HP: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
0 | 0
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] TEXT: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]

[/td][/tr][/table][/td]

[td][table][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] NAME: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Click here to add title
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] ELEMENT: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Other
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] COST: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
X
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] TYPE: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Creature
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] ATK | HP: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
0 | 0
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] TEXT: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]

[/td][/tr][/table][/td][/tr][/table]

[table][tr][td][table][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] ART: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]

[/td][/tr]
[tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] IDEA: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]

[/td][/tr]
[tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] NOTES: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]

[/td][/tr]
[tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] SERIES: [/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]

[/td][/tr][/table][/td][/tr][/table][/spoiler]

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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231150#msg1231150
« Reply #1 on: April 19, 2016, 08:37:47 am »
i dun quite understand what brawl 5 means,
the brawl 5 links to anvil archive:
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/anvil-archive/

so we get to improve an card idea from anvil archive?

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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231186#msg1231186
« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2016, 09:11:02 pm »
For reference, here are all the custom-made cards from Brawl #5.

Not including upgraded cards or cards without images or cards where their images had been deleted (most of A Toadally Newtral Team's cards :'( )

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Round 1

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Round 2

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Round 3

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Round 4

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Round 5

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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231197#msg1231197
« Reply #3 on: April 20, 2016, 01:04:51 am »
-snip-

Thanks CO. This will be added to the OP.
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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231205#msg1231205
« Reply #4 on: April 20, 2016, 02:04:57 am »
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NAME:
Neuter
ELEMENT:
Other
COST:
15
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:

TEXT:
Replace all attack and quanta abilities from target creature to generate 3 random quantas each turn.
NAME:
Mutilate
ELEMENT:
Other
COST:
15
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:

TEXT:
Target creature gets all attack and quanta abilities replaced to generate 4 random quantas each turn.

ART:

IDEA:
A Todally Newtering Card from A Toadally Newtral Team
NOTES:
Make your enemies powerless or make
your creatures obedient to focus generate quanta for you,
either way, this is a really disturbing card name.
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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231207#msg1231207
« Reply #5 on: April 20, 2016, 02:37:20 am »
Fluzard's upgraded card is outright fundamental to its design. It's errant not to include it into the spoiler.

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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231218#msg1231218
« Reply #6 on: April 20, 2016, 05:31:14 am »
Fluzard's upgraded card is outright fundamental to its design. It's errant not to include it into the spoiler.
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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231524#msg1231524
« Reply #7 on: April 23, 2016, 10:53:41 pm »
If I got this right we need to submit a card satisfying the corresponding task and that is better than the original. Right?
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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231525#msg1231525
« Reply #8 on: April 23, 2016, 10:56:19 pm »
If I got this right we need to submit a card satisfying the corresponding task and that is better than the original. Right?
Right, or at least better in your opinion.
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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231536#msg1231536
« Reply #9 on: April 24, 2016, 01:43:06 am »
If I got this right we need to submit a card satisfying the corresponding task and that is better than the original. Right?
Right, or at least better in your opinion.

So there are two ways we can go about this? Improving the card balance wise or improving it thematically?
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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231537#msg1231537
« Reply #10 on: April 24, 2016, 01:45:39 am »
The spirit of the task is to create an improved version of a card submission for Brawl #5 while still making sure it can hold its ground as a thematic and balance card as well.

Granted, whatever gets votes, gets votes. But only card submissions for this CDC which properly credit the original Brawl submission and follow all other rules will be added to the subsequent poll.
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Re: Challenge 8-2: Brawl's End https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=61808.msg1231812#msg1231812
« Reply #11 on: April 29, 2016, 01:00:55 am »
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NAME:
Kitsune
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
3 :time
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
1 | 1
TEXT:
:aether : Grow tail
Gain +1|+1.  May randomly draw a card, or gain or lose mommentum or immortality
NAME:
Kitsune
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
2 :time
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
1 | 1
TEXT:
:aether : Grow tail
Gain +1|+1.  May randomly draw a card, or gain or lose mommentum or immortality

ART:

IDEA:

NOTES:
Kitsune by Abyss Brawlers from Round 3
So, for my improvements I tackled several problems.
First, their card was too complex.
Second, most of the complexity wasn't on the card.
Third, the card was too strong (an in element growth ability with perks).
Fourth, the 9 tail limit, while highly thematic, is mostly pointless in a came with such limited design space.

As such, I simplified the ability, making it weaker and fitting it all on the card.  I also bumped the cost by one, because even with my nerfs the card was too strong.
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