the main problem is you have very little damage early game acceleration is good late in the game but early it is slow if you want to go with mono gravy i'd add some sapphire chargers for some reasonable unblockable damage. I think i would drop that forever alone pend and the momentums and add chargers maybe an oty as well through experience 2 upped otys is usually enough control as if you go against ffq or pharoah your otys aren't going to be able to contol the creatures anyway.