Evaluate my Aether/Time for gods

[Nihilus]

Mark of Time

Time Factory x2
Golden houglass x3
Aether Pillar x16
Aether Tower x2
Paralel Universe x6
Phase Dragon x6
Immortal x6
Dimensional Shield x6
Total: 41

I win some times, and vs Incarnate I made mastery a couple of times.
Sugestions and advices will be welcome.

Thanks

[kraze]

too slow to set up initially imo

you are basically fcked against scorpio, morte, seism, graviton, hermes, rainbow, chaos lord

[Parabol]

How about...
Mark of Light
Upgraded Sundial x 6
PU x 6
Lightning x 6
Aether Dragon x 6
Phase Shield x 6
umm...20 aether pillars? Not sure how many would work.
The lightning is for emphasising the card advantage given by PU and immortal creatures.  No immortals are included because they are not particularly good for 8 aether.  Against Seism, for instance, they will be doing 1-2 damage depending on whether you upgraded them or not.

This contains most of the damage of your original, and the speed aspect thru sundials, and stays at a relatively modest 50 cards.  Some of your creature control costs nothing to play (sundials), whilst the lightning only costs one, and best of all it's mostly aether.

Feel free to throw in lobo/electro if you have it...maybe take it to 19 pillars.