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Writing Competition: The Seven Wonders [VOTING] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59737.msg1207568#msg1207568
« on: September 29, 2015, 07:40:03 am »
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Spoiler for foxrain4:
Riding his four horses from the sky, Helios, the god of sun descended on mortal earth.
He have not came with good intentions, he grows sick of the bloody wars.

“Bloody mortals! They only live to a hundred years old but
yet they are wasting their precious life force on fighting.
This madness must stopped!” growled Helios.

But things is not as simple as it always seems to be.
The ruler of Cyprus, Antigonus tempted by ambition and greed
have landed a siege to the city of Rhodes.

Its an impossible siege as the great city of Rhodes is surrounded by waters.
Birds flock across the river surface, picking swimming fishes and flying back to their nests.
The waters not only bring in wealth, trade and food to the local villagers of Rhodes,
It also deters enemies from attacking Rhodes easily.

At the final meeting of his thousands troops and strong generals.
“You must attack with all units at once, that’s how you win a war.”
Antigonus confidently commanded his generals to bring his fierceful troops
to land an attack on the narrow path at East of city of Rhodes.

while Antigonus quitely prepared his own elite soldiers on giant warships
and sail to the West of city of Rhodes.

Antigonus knows that the East narrow path to city of Rhodes cant holds on all
of his land troops and decide to conquer Rhodes with another main attack
through the west river pathway to city of Rhodes.

As a bad expert on naval combat, Antigonus soon realized his mistake,
the waters surrounding city of Rhodes is too shallow, the river bottom rocks keeps banging onto his warships.
His warships was delayed causing his East land troops to end up as mincemeat when reaching the enemies’ fortress.

Defending troops from Rhodes shoot arrows at the late arriving warships killing many of the on board troops.
When panicked Antigonus and his warship arrived at the harbour of Rhodes,
all they could see was blood river and dead bodies of his own land troops flowing on the surface.

The troops of Rhodes decides to rid the root of evil for good, reaching for peace in the next 100 years. And they go and slay every single enemy, surrendered or not.

The sun turned bright.
Helios tried to stop the war by bringing out the power of Sun,
the day instantly turned white,
Everyone turned blind.

“They are as good as blind people anyway.” Helios comforted himself to stop the pointless killings.

Villagers from neighbouring cities came and was shocked at all the blinded people,
They build the Colossus of Rhodes which is the statue of Helios, the God of Sun to remember this bizarre incident.

Spoiler for RootRanger:
I've spent all my life on a quest
In search of the wonders of old
I long for their magical mystic
And ancient allure they hold

Despite my unending devotion,
My efforts have been of no use
I only encountered one wonder:
Some boring, old statue of Zeus

I honestly think its existence
Is nothing short of enigmatic
It doesn't belong in a temple
Instead, it should be in an attic

Whoever created this monster
Would have some explaining to do
I cannot be sure who it was,
But I have a theory or two

Perhaps it was crafted by Wyrms
To honor their God of the Air
Such evidence lies in its structure
It clearly was made without care

Or mayhaps the makings of Vultures,
Who feast on their moribund prey
Quite clearly resemblant of Death,
The statue was plagued with decay

Consider the Rustlers of Life,
Who tussle about in the trees
Did they design such a weak statue?
It could not withstand but a breeze

Or was it constructed from Time,
The ancient realm of Deja Vu?
The statue was made without purpose,
And Deja Vus have no use too

It might be the works of the Wardens,
The basic creators of Earth
For much like their Element's weapon,
The statue was lacking in worth

Was it from the Entropy world,
The land of the old Fallen Elves?
If they've made this ugly disaster,
It should have been kept to themselves

Nigh any of these could be blamed
A few other Elements might
It could have been Darkness, or Water,
Or Gravity, Aether, or Light

The Element which made the statue
Is not very easy to pick
Eleven possibilities
Seem equally realistic

I've no way of knowing which one
There still remains much to inquire
Of only one thing I am certain:
The statue was not made by Fire

Spoiler for Clean0nion:
War.  It's no recent thing. Even thousands of years ago, war has ravaged across the worlds and planes of existence, each entity and element struggling to stay afloat above the endless desperation of others. This is the story of one such war.

Ginyu, the Master of Gravity, looked out across his land. Today was a peaceful day. He inhaled, letting the air fill his lungs. It was cool and refreshing. Lucky me, he thought. I get to breathe this air a thousand more times today.

If his element had been at war against Air, he might have been more worried. Or perhaps if he had been at war with Death, he might be wearing a gas mask. But Air was being peaceful, and Death was busy battling Life - a private war between two old archenemies that never seemed to stop.

Ginyu sighed. How he wished to be like Air, at peace with the world. Alas, Gravity was at war with Earth, and had been for the past few months.

The Gravity Element was currently based in Rhodes, Greece. Training troops and defending his land was Ginyu's main concern, as his element dictated some time spent on technological developments rather than attacking. Only recently, for example, had he discovered the method of upgrading his soldiers - very useful, but often too expensive to justify. His best men were working on developing more upgrades, but their progress was slowed by the constant threat of Earth.

Through his window he could see a great statue - not just any old statue, but one of his most prized possessions. It towered above any other building in the city, standing proud and tall - but also vainly, for it was a statue of the Master of Gravity himself. His very own testament of his power on par with the gods. His very own Colossus.

Ginyu had many things to do today. Review the Armagio construction site, activate the Accelerator, check the Otyugh farms - he shuddered at the thought. Otyughs were powerful, yes, and certainly versatile, but they were awful creatures to fight alongside. They consumed anything in their path - enemies, friends, even themselves. If he recalled correctly, they'd been created from a stolen Abomination. They were indeed a genetic abomination.

First, though, he needed to send out the next platoon of Graviton Mercenaries.

He left his office, taking heavy steps down the grand corridors of the Gravity Palace, his old firemaster armour clinking and clacking as he walked.

He entered the War Room, his Nymph poring over the great map. His interest peaked at the creature's presence, he decided that the Mercenaries could wait.

"Nymph. How progresses the war?"

The orange woman turned her head towards him, floating like a ghost. Her whole body blinked like a failing light bulb as she shifted in and out of the Spell World, eternally. Her life was hell through no fault of her own, and Ginyu knew that. But she never complained.

"Not well, my master. Earth is pushing in from the west, and their Shriekers overpower our Mercenaries. We're sending out as many as we can, and can hold back the flow, but..."

"But what?"

The Nymph exhaled a long, hard breath before speaking. "It's the Antlions, sir.  None of us expected them. They burrow under our defences and attack from behind. There's a reason they've always been so underpowered, and that was why - they have the element of surprise."

Ginyu shook his head. "Surprise. The 13th Element."

He passed his hands across the map. A tiny wooden model of himself stood atop the city of Rhodes, with the Nymph and a couple of most of the creatures of Gravity. Only a few inches to the west was a row of Shriekers and Antlions.

"How far west are they?" he asked.

"On the island of Chalki, sir, and moving in across the sea as we speak."

"And what of Water? Are they allowing this?"

"Water is occupying itself with Fire. Sir, with all due respect," the Nymph said, her voice raised a little, "we must deal with the Shriekers - Water's petty troubles with Fire are none of our concern!"

Ginyu shook his head again. "For every ten Mercenaries we send, a single Shrieker can take them all. You know what we need to do."

She stared at him blankly.

He mouthed one word: Overdrive.

The Nymph was shocked. "Sir, surely you can't-"

"I am the Master of Gravity. I do as I please."

The Nymph began to back away. Her phase shifting became more rapid. "Sir, I can't authorise that! It's experimental!"

"We have no choice."



Six Armagios followed Ginyu and the Nymph to the Accelerator: a great metal tube, extending deep underground and then curving back up, which could be aimed at any angle into the sky. It was a genius invention. A Catapult with the ability to Accelerate its fodder? It was perfect!

"Armagios!" he shouted. The great metal beasts listened, their armoured plates sliding endlessly across one another, protecting their supermassive core.

"You have been specially trained for one thing. To be accelerated. Today, you will know greater glory. Today..."

He pulled a lever on the side of the Accelerator, opening a secret panel. Behind this was a keypad, into which he punched a secret code. The gentle hum of the Accelerator stopped, then started again - this time it rose to a high-pitched crescendo, deafening those nearby. His voice, however, out-boomed the mechanical beast.

"TODAY! YOU SHALL UNDERGO OVERDRIVE!!"



Ginyu sat at the controls of the Accelerator. He turned off Catapult and Accelerate, then turned on Overdrive. He'd never had a chance to use it, and couldn't help but grin at the thought.

"I would like to point out that I don't condone this." said the Nymph. "But while you're at it, you might as well enable Momentum, in case they have defences."

The Master of Gravity smiled at her, then flipped the switch she had suggested. He whacked "GO" as hard as he could.

The Accelerator began sucking on pipelines like a child on a straw, gobbling up Gravity quanta. The pillar farms' quanta reserves depleted and they struggled to refill. All other processes in Rhodes ground to a halt as the Accelerator drained the city of its reserves.

One by one, the Armagios were launched into the Accelerator. Their speed increased to tremendous levels, and each could feel their health decreasing - but as it did, they became far more dangerous. Such was the balance of Overdrive.

They wouldn't have long to live after leaving the Accelerator, but once in the air there was nothing they could do to speed their flight, except wait.

The first Armagio was bombarded from the end of the Accelerator, and flew into the air.

Far above the world, it could see everything - but being a machine, it didn't care. The sun baked down upon it as the Master of Light watched with curiosity. Far below, Water fought with Fire, steam rising in mass from the sea. On the horizon, hundreds of bolts of Lightning crackled continuously over the landscape as Aether fought something - it was surely winning... but then the Armagio realised that the lightning was simply repeating over and over - the Master of Time was using Reverse Time to actually play with the lightning, taunting Aether.

The Armagio stopped rising, and began to descend. Its health entered dangerous levels, but the damage it could do reached its climax.

As the Armagio drew close to the Shriekers, it was charged with power. Far away, Ginyu saw only six great explosions, then silence.



"Sir." the Nymph said. "The Master of Earth is here to officially announce his surrender."

The Master of Gravity nodded. "Let him in."

The Master of Earth entered Ginyu's office, faking polite awe at the grandeur.

"My Master, my rightful victor." he said, bowing at Ginyu's feet. "I present to you a token of my respect... my Pulverizer."

Ginyu's eyes gleamed with greed, and he reached out to touch the legendary weapon.

But when he did, it became charged with Gravity quanta - and the Master of Earth smiled.

He placed his whole weight on the weapon, wrenching it out of Ginyu's grasp, and brought it down upon the floor. With a tumultuous CRACK, the weapon was activated.

The floor shattered into a thousand pieces of marble. The cracks spread through the palace and across the city. The Master of Earth smiled again, and Earth quanta appeared in his hands - he was about to cast a spell.

Ginyu tried to stop him, jumping forward as fast as he could, yelling at the top of his voice - but it was too late. An Earthquake boomed through the palace, sending ripples of earth through the whole city - damaging countless buildings, collapsing barracks and farms, destroying exactly three pillars - but the worst damage was yet to come...

Ginyu's eye was drawn to his most prized statue, but there was nothing he could do. It was already toppling.

Ginyu grabbed the edge of his desk, his knuckles turning white with pressure, his face showing only despair. His statue, his statue was destroyed.

These days, only rocky remains and rubble serve to remind people about what towering construction once stood in that place. Some even say that they hear Ginyu's anguished scream, carried by reminiscent wind through the ages...

Spoiler for JonathanCrazyJ:
“WE ARE THE DEAD”

“Yes, so you said. Repeatedly. What I’d like to know is what you want.”

“WE ARE THE DEAD”

Mausolus surveyed the lifeless crowd from his travel throne. It was being carried by an Armagio, offering him a decent vantage point, though not affording the usual standards of comfort that he, the Satrap of Halicarnassus, usually expected. He was losing is patience. 

“And what in the name of the Emperor’s sweaty fourth chin do you expect me to do about it?”

“WE ARE THE DEAD”

The Satrap picked up the Persian Cat on his lap and flung it at the nearest Skeleton. Unfortunately it was a Schrodinger’s Cat, and promptly died before leaping back onto him, very much alive, and another Skeleton rose from the Boneyard.

“I… I am the dead?” its fleshless skull uttered.

“WE ARE THE DEAD” echoed its compatriots.

Mausolus spat on the closest of his Graviton Guards. “I told my wife never to buy pedigree animals. First those bloody Otyughs eating me out of house and home, and now this Feline monstrosity. For hundreds of years this Graveyard has been the peaceful resting place of the nobles in my realm, now suddenly these skeletal scoundrels are almost at the city gates! It’s unsanitary, there’ll be Plagues next! Back to the Palace.”

The cumbersome procession slowly turned around (Armagios don’t have the best of turning circles, and the Guards had to clear a path through the bodies and bones) and soon they were on their way back through the Boneyards. Mausolus was just helping himself to a lunch of Giant Frog’s legs, when they stopped abruptly.

“That’s odd…” His Guard Captain muttered. “This was the way we came…”

A towering blockade of miss-matched bones stood in their path.
The Satrap’s cat began to glow…




“People of Halicarnassus! We have a crisis in our City! The living bones of our ancestors are rising up in numbers we can not control. Worst of all, my beloved husband, your glorious Satrap has been killed while attempting to parlay with the Undead hoard.”

Artemisia, the Satrap’s wife, addressed the nobles and representatives of the city. She wore black, signifying her mourning.

“I believe, however it pains me to know that they took my husband from me, that the dead are not our enemies. We have left them in these simple, ugly boneyards for centuries. The dead deserve more. My husband deserves more. We must build a mighty temple in his honor. For Mausolus. A Mausoleum of beauty and majesty to hold the dead. To keep them, and us, at peace. And in my late husband’s absence… I will lead this city. I will keep us safe.”

As the crowds cheered, and the guards herded the dead into holding pens while the Mausoleum of Halicarnassus began construction, the dead man’s wife smiled thinly. And stroked her cat.

Spoiler for AD TienzuStorm:
“Silence is golden.” Gaia repeated this phrase to herself as she walked out to the balcony. Her garden palace was nice and peaceful, and she generally liked staying there. But she couldn’t shake off that feeling of nervousness. What was there to be nervous about? Thanatos was way over in a different dimension with Eteru, nowhere near Gaia’s palace. But nonetheless the feeling persisted. Gaia sighed. Oh well.

She stepped onto a nearby tree and its branch moved her to the ground level of the palace. She stepped off her natural elevator and walked down the main walkway. The dryads all seemed to be sleeping at this time of the day.

“More peace I suppose.”

Just as Gaia formulated the thought, a distant crash sounded. She turned, and saw to her horror a rampaging horde of Ivory Dragons tearing away at her palace’s southern walls using their bony scales and claws.

Thinking quickly, she pulled out a grass whistle and blew . Almost immediately all dryads were outside in the courtyard of the garden palace. Gaia cleared her throat.

“It appears that there are Ivory Dragons attempting to break in. We must stop them immediately.”

As the dryads nodded and sped off, Gaia ground her teeth as she muttered “Thanatos” under her breath.



The piercing shriek of a dying dryad filled the air.

A feeling of defeat came over Gaia. Her wonderful garden palace was in ruins, and now Thanatos’s army of undead creatures was overrunning her platoon of dryads and other small creatures. She sighed. She had to stop this bloodshed before Thanatos absorbed too much necromantic energy.

Gaia stepped out into the courtyard, where Thanatos was waiting, smiling with his eyes closed as his entire bony body glowed in deep purple.

Thanatos looked up and smiled. ”Why hello there Gaia. Fancy meeting you here, eh?”

Gaia scoffed angrily. ”Get out of my garden palace before I get you out myself.”

Thanatos laughed dismissively. ”Sure, sure, I’ll leave, whatever. Of course, I've linked myself to every living thing in this palace, so when I leave and our connection is severed, they'll all die. But that's trivial I suppose."

Before Gaia could do anything, Thanatos's body crumbled into a pile of bones, and she could feel the sudden wave of death burst out from it. She looked around in horror. All her carefully nourished plants, her beautiful dryads, her creations of life, were all dead.

She fell to the ground and sobbed in the midst of the destruction Thanatos had caused. It seemed he had even managed to kill a little part of herself as well.



Eteru looked down at the physical world. He had noticed a strange burst of death waves zooming around in the aether.

He pinpointed the source. It was the remains of what appeared to be a palace.

"Thanatos just decided to destroy a palace for fun huh. Typical."

Suddenly, Eteru thought of something. Wasn't that the place where Gaia's garden palace was?

He shifted over to the physical realm and transported himself to the location.

As he arrived, he could hear the sound of somebody crying. Eteru peered around a corner of crumbling stone.

Gaia.

He waited for a bit, then waited more. She had been crying for hours. There was no way Eteru was going to let her cry for all eternity. And in this state, he decided he would make this location almost impossible to get to.

Eteru floated up into the air, then let out a giant burst of aetheric waves. It passed through all the dimensions and pierced to the center of every mind there ever was and ever will be.





It is said that from that point onward, nobody would ever be able to locate where the ruins of the garden were located. Even the other gods were unable to pinpoint its exact location.

The entire incident just disappeared from history.

Except I remember. Because I can never forget.

- Eteru

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Re: Writing Competition: The Seven Wonders [VOTING] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59737.msg1208911#msg1208911
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2015, 05:49:38 pm »
Thanks for the votes guys! <3 A hundred years of good fortune to you and your families

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Re: Writing Competition: The Seven Wonders [VOTING] https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59737.msg1208916#msg1208916
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2015, 07:18:37 pm »
Congratz Clean! Your story was really great and fun to read :-)
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