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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg218596#msg218596
« Reply #24 on: December 07, 2010, 03:01:09 am »
I agree less is more, (up to a point)  but for 9 to be a real parody, some details i would've loved to see, were absent.
I will ask you too then: please elaborate?

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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg218827#msg218827
« Reply #25 on: December 07, 2010, 01:51:14 pm »
I agree less is more, (up to a point)  but for 9 to be a real parody, some details i would've loved to see, were absent.
I will ask you too then: please elaborate?
No problem, and excuse (in advance) the fussiness involved :b

I like sux's picture>layout integration very much, and to be honest, I never thought of that. I'd do this , instead. And here are the reasons.


1) Fonts. Proportions, character size and shape (I could fit your E in a square and the original E in a rectangle)

2) Lead, or whatever that is called in english. You could play with elements symbols, i put a life symbol for the lulz, and to stick with the theme.

3) Image... that re-scale hurts, the original dragon was very clean at its original size. I selected the whole background and put a lens blur over it, just to give it a more "photojournalistic" look, and a bit of depth of field meanwhile. The dragon itself has an amazing detail and texture, and it's very eye-catching...so no need to touch that. I played with the levels a little, too. (not that it helped much) but it'd save you from sharing half of the award icon with Peps xD let's admit it, the dragon is 80% of the submission.
PS: that highlighted square over its head is my favorite part of it)

4) Yet another nice thing about Pepokish's dragon is that it has a nice structure for you to put info over it. Your submission has text over its body (white text, not very comfortable to read), and the subtitle eats the whole background.  Too many things are happening in that corner.
I rearranged the same amount of info just to show you what i mean.

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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg218849#msg218849
« Reply #26 on: December 07, 2010, 02:25:15 pm »
After that post and
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/1535/elementalstructure.pngI may assume that Asymmetry has studied "cover design".
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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg219099#msg219099
« Reply #27 on: December 07, 2010, 09:55:29 pm »
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That is awesome.  I would suggest PMing vrt or pepokish and see if they can fit that into their Art Class somewhere.

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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg219165#msg219165
« Reply #28 on: December 07, 2010, 11:21:18 pm »
Thanks for the analysis asymmetry, it's very helpful. Also, yes, something like this could be very helpful over in the art class. I know I certainly enjoyed your critique!

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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg219505#msg219505
« Reply #29 on: December 08, 2010, 02:58:29 pm »
You're welcome. I don't know how this will help vrt and peps, though :P

@RR ... sort of. I'm at graphic design, the closest thing I have to layout design is typography. Not my favorite subject, in any way :<
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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg219792#msg219792
« Reply #30 on: December 08, 2010, 11:22:16 pm »
You're welcome. I don't know how this will help vrt and peps, though :P
I think you can help very effectively by providing your own opinions and critiques of peoples work in the art class. If you want to go this in depth, great. Something a bit lighter and quicker, also great. Help vrt and pepokish keep the discussion going and keep people learning. The last of the few art classes I ever took had that going for it. Everyone examined each others work and detailed what they liked/disliked about it, what they thought worked well and not so well. Everyone learns, everyone wins during discussion.

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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg220861#msg220861
« Reply #31 on: December 10, 2010, 06:49:12 am »
Voted 6 and 9 --instant recognition of Nat Geo earned my vote for sure!
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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg221119#msg221119
« Reply #32 on: December 10, 2010, 05:45:07 pm »
ps asymmetry, pepokish didn't make that leaf dragon. I believe Sunny Greens made it as a tribute to pepokish's original

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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg221301#msg221301
« Reply #33 on: December 10, 2010, 09:45:54 pm »
1 & 9 for me! nice job

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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg221376#msg221376
« Reply #34 on: December 10, 2010, 11:20:58 pm »
ps asymmetry, pepokish didn't make that leaf dragon. I believe Sunny Greens made it as a tribute to pepokish's original
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Re: Voting: Make a Magazine https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16895.msg221399#msg221399
« Reply #35 on: December 11, 2010, 12:02:49 am »
Waaahh! My magazine only got 1.5% of all votes!

I mean, I know that pic sux but at least my work could fetch more than 3 votes, can't it? (yes, I voted for mine xD )

Any votes are appreciated, hopefully my work won't be last. Wasn't easy to make it even though it probably doesn't look like it.

 

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