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Unexploded Atomic Bomb | Primed Nuclear Warhead https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59161.msg1200852#msg1200852
« on: August 13, 2015, 02:08:23 am »
NAME:
Unexploded Atomic Bomb
ELEMENT:
Gravity
COST:
4 :gravity
TYPE:
Permanent
TEXT:
:entropy :entropy : Detonate
Deals 10 damage to the opponent and poisons each creature twice. Sacrifices card.
NAME:
Primed Nuclear Warhead
ELEMENT:
Gravity
COST:
4 :gravity
TYPE:
Permanent
TEXT:
:entropy :entropy : Detonate
Deals 30 damage to both players and poisons each creature. Sacrifices card.

ART:
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IDEA:
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NOTES:
It's Unstable Gas but different.

Why poison? Because radiation poisoning.

Unupped, upon detonation, deals 10 damage to the enemy only, and places two poisons on every creature on the field.
Less damage, more CC.

Upped, upon detonation, deals 30 damage to both players, and places a single poison on every creature on the field.
More damage... still a lot of CC. But the damage is two-way. And you can only ever have 100 health, whereas your opponent can have up to 200 (I think) so there's more disadvantage.

Obviously the card is destroyed after you detonate it.

Please do comment if you think it's unbalanced.
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« Last Edit: September 20, 2015, 08:48:42 pm by Clean0nion »

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Re: Unexploded Atomic Bomb | Primed Nuclear Warhead https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59161.msg1200893#msg1200893
« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2015, 12:44:45 pm »
Sweet art. Not sure what to think of it yet. :gravity and :entropy are a kind of strange combo most of the time. I could see the upped version being OP in Discord-BlackHole decks. I most like the idea of double poison, and I think the unupped would be sweet in a lot of rainbows: powerful, but hindered in terms of its CC ability by the same slowness that affects Plague.

I think you should make your mind up on the radiation thing. Just poison sounds fair to me, in which case I would just phrase it like
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Re: Unexploded Atomic Bomb | Primed Nuclear Warhead https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59161.msg1200905#msg1200905
« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2015, 05:28:36 pm »
Sweet art.
Many thanks!

I think you should make your mind up on the radiation thing
How about radiation poisoning? Now I just need to find a way to fit it on the card... any ideas?

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Re: Unexploded Atomic Bomb | Primed Nuclear Warhead https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59161.msg1200906#msg1200906
« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2015, 05:51:31 pm »
I don't see why it absolutely needs to be called radiation, poison works just fine as well.
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Re: Unexploded Atomic Bomb | Primed Nuclear Warhead https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59161.msg1200907#msg1200907
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2015, 06:13:23 pm »
Unless you have a reason to have a completely identical status to poison, just use poison.

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Re: Unexploded Atomic Bomb | Primed Nuclear Warhead https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=59161.msg1200923#msg1200923
« Reply #5 on: August 13, 2015, 11:29:09 pm »
Sounds good to me. Radiation counters changed to poison. That also gives space to specify that the card is destroyed when you use it. Thanks Undeadspider, Storm and Frozen!

 

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