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Slime|Greater Slime https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23354.msg297061#msg297061
« on: March 24, 2011, 03:58:11 am »
NAME:
Slime
ELEMENT:
Water
COST:
5 :water
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3|6
TEXT:
:water Split:
Slime Splits into 2 Slimes with half its current hp.
Slime gains +0|1 per turn.
NAME:
Greater Slime
ELEMENT:
Water
COST:
5 :water
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3|8
TEXT:
:water Split:
Greater Slime Splits into 2 Greater Slimes with half its current hp.
Greater Slime gains +0|1 per turn.
ART:
IDEA:
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NOTES:
The 2 new Slime|Greater Slime generated have the same attack as the current Slime|Greater Slime that Split.
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Re: Slime|Greater Slime https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23354.msg297071#msg297071
« Reply #1 on: March 24, 2011, 04:19:24 am »
There is an issue here, many will tell you is that it is taboo, and most likely will receive a lot of criticism.

I wont address that issue, I will tell you of the formatting issues. Any section of the section of the table that is not used, leave blank. On the Element line put Water not :water.
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Re: Slime|Greater Slime https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23354.msg297079#msg297079
« Reply #2 on: March 24, 2011, 04:36:21 am »
If engulf only means -1 HP, I'm in ;O

If Engulfing the target were changed from, I'm guessing, killing the creature to only taking away -1 HP, it would seem a little less taboo (:

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Re: Slime|Greater Slime https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23354.msg297089#msg297089
« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2011, 05:40:13 am »
If engulf works like Devour and only can target creatures with less hp you need to make note of it in the notes section at the very least.

"Original Creature" or "Original Stats" refers to the stats that would be shown on the card while it is in your hand. You probably meant "Current HP" which refers to the hp as it currently exists including both temporary and permanent modifications to that instance of the creature type.

Additionally this card is more complex than it needs to be. I count 4 separate cards (Engulf, Split, atk=hp/2 and gain +0|1 per turn) inside this one.
Suggestion: Drop the Engulf and Atk=hp/2 abilities and change the card text to:
"Split: Slime splits into 2 Slimes with half the current stats.
Slime gains +0|1 per turn."
This way it is simpler (another of Zanz's comments) and it can fit all the card text on the card image.

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Re: Slime|Greater Slime https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23354.msg297091#msg297091
« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2011, 05:57:59 am »
If engulf works like Devour and only can target creatures with less hp you need to make note of it in the notes section at the very least.

"Original Creature" or "Original Stats" refers to the stats that would be shown on the card while it is in your hand. You probably meant "Current HP" which refers to the hp as it currently exists including both temporary and permanent modifications to that instance of the creature type.

Additionally this card is more complex than it needs to be. I count 4 separate cards (Engulf, Split, atk=hp/2 and gain +0|1 per turn) inside this one.
Suggestion: Drop the Engulf and Atk=hp/2 abilities and change the card text to:
"Split: Slime splits into 2 Slimes with half the current stats.
Slime gains +0|1 per turn."
This way it is simpler (another of Zanz's comments) and it can fit all the card text on the card image.

Zanz decreed upon witnessing the problems the first Alfatoxin had caused that there would be no more instant kill cards that did not take the hp of the target into account. Flooding is the only instant kill card that ignore the hp of the target that has not been preemptively vetoed.


Agreed, it's rather confusing as well. Also what about freeze + shockwave?

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Re: Slime|Greater Slime https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23354.msg297093#msg297093
« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2011, 06:06:10 am »
Ok
let me rethink about it.

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Re: Slime|Greater Slime https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23354.msg297907#msg297907
« Reply #6 on: March 25, 2011, 12:43:43 pm »
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