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Title: Whitewall
Post by: artimies7 on October 30, 2012, 01:31:20 am: He's better than other colors. (http://whitewall.webatu.com/)

To specify, this comic is my great undertaking. My Magnum Opus.
Yell at me about anything, but I'll be really hoping for your support!
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: Skotadi Phobos on October 30, 2012, 01:37:03 am: It's interesting, I don't understand it at all, but it's still interesting
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: artimies7 on October 31, 2012, 09:38:55 pm: Quote from: artimies7 on October 30, 2012, 09:22:19 pm
Take your time, SP. It gets clearer as it goes along.

Actually, do you have any suggestions on how to make it more clear?
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: Skotadi Phobos on November 01, 2012, 12:36:48 am: Quote from: artimies7 on October 31, 2012, 09:38:55 pm
Quote from: artimies7 on October 30, 2012, 09:22:19 pm
Take your time, SP. It gets clearer as it goes along.

Actually, do you have any suggestions on how to make it more clear?
Nope, I don't know enough about the story to make any suggestions on how to make it better.
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: artimies7 on November 01, 2012, 02:22:06 am: Is the story all? If it is, then I've little to worry about.

I highly doubt that the story's all. Is it?
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: Skotadi Phobos on November 01, 2012, 04:43:08 am: Quote from: artimies7 on November 01, 2012, 02:22:06 am
Is the story all? If it is, then I've little to worry about.

I highly doubt that the story's all. Is it?
I don't know what you mean by "is the story all" but I am interested in seeing what it turns into.
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: artimies7 on November 01, 2012, 08:46:31 pm: Quote from: skotadi phobos on November 01, 2012, 04:43:08 am
I don't know what you mean by "is the story all" but I am interested in seeing what it turns into.

Oh-ho, if you're interested in where it's going, then tell your friends and hug your mother: It's turning into a whole damn lot.

EDIT: I hope to be updating every Monday from now on.
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: BeefSupreme on October 13, 2013, 11:02:41 pm: Very interesting. Lol, this main character guy seems like a dunce.
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: artimies7 on October 13, 2013, 11:30:19 pm: He gets smarter as he goes along. Sometimes his getting-smarter process is duncey though. Based on a true story.
Title: Re: Whitewall
Post by: Skotadi Phobos on October 23, 2013, 09:45:19 pm: Quote from: artimies7 on October 13, 2013, 11:30:19 pm
He gets smarter as he goes along. Sometimes his getting-smarter process is duncey though. Based on a true story.
He's gotta start somewhere to make progress.